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I've Been Dreaming by ~PeterJK:iconPeterJK:

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I've been dreaming that
I've been far away.
In these shoes
I've been following you,
Through days and nights combined;
Making sure you find your way,
To your furthest point and say
"All those that I have found and lost
You all meant much to me
I'll find you again to see your wives
And be your childs aunt."
So I've Been knowing,
You've been far away
And I've been dreaming to be closer;
To make the most of life,
Breaking in hope, dreams and light
Though strife love tears and might.
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This was going to go into scraps but I finished it whilst typing it up

This is one of the many things I have written whilst at college, and now I have free time I'm sharing the love, it's mainly prose, so you won't get to see it all but I will try my best


Oh and fyi, I am male, the aunt bit will sort of make sense more if you know how I actually in the "real world"
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~talk-nerdy-to-me:icontalk-nerdy-to-me: Nov 28, 2007, 6:58:12 PM
Haha, I was finishing up going through all the club submissions and I was reading this one and I was like "Ooh I really like it, I wonder who wrote it!" And then I saw it was you and I was like "AHH! not HIM again! Dammit, I need to quit faving his work or I'll end up looking some crazed obsessed stalker! :ohnoes:"

So you sir, have to start writing to crap so I can not like it and not fave it! =P

Just kidding, great piece by the way, my rambling was supposed to somehow vaguely convey that to you! :lol:

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Mine, O thou Lord of life, send my roots rain.

My heart's a hole that needs to constantly be filled with love.

I followed the voice you gave to me but now I gotta find my own

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~PeterJK:iconPeterJK: Nov 29, 2007, 10:52:33 AM
yeah, i somewhat got that ^.^

i'm afraid the only crap i have is my earliest work

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~talk-nerdy-to-me:icontalk-nerdy-to-me: Nov 29, 2007, 1:30:54 PM
Haha, good, alot of the time I start talking [babbling/rambling] at people and they completely miss the point! *shakes head and tuts* What is the world coming to? :lol:

And no worries, the only crap I have it uhm... all my work! Lol, not really, I'm not that down on my work, I just feel so inadequate when I see the work of some really talented writers on here, makes me ashamed of my pieces that I had thought were so good! Of course I know I shouldn't do that and I try not to, but it's hard not to compare yourself to other people you know?

But anyways, don't mind me, you just go on being good! =D :nod:

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Mine, O thou Lord of life, send my roots rain.

My heart's a hole that needs to constantly be filled with love.

I followed the voice you gave to me but now I gotta find my own

Go to *RawEm0tion
~PeterJK:iconPeterJK: Nov 29, 2007, 3:29:57 PM
thing is about all sites is the people who really work hard don't get recognised, i watch a few writers who are seriously underrated, and then you get people who are useless, but because they have seminude photos of them they have loads of watchers

ah well

just keep trying, if you can write, you've still got one up on most people on dA =P

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~talk-nerdy-to-me:icontalk-nerdy-to-me: Nov 30, 2007, 2:43:31 PM
I feel that pretty much ALL writers here on deviant don't get any recognition! It's pretty all about the visual artists, which is too bad. I mean I like visual art alot too, but still not many acknowledge the good and hard work of the writers... *le sigh*

But yeah, I know what you mean, I know a few writers who I think are absolutely amazing and they're practically ignored. It's really too bad...

We writers need to stick together! :highfive: Booyeah! =D

But yeah, I don't actually write as often as I'd like but it seem my muse is somewhat coming back to me so I'll try to spout out some semi-decent poems soon! =D

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Mine, O thou Lord of life, send my roots rain.

My heart's a hole that needs to constantly be filled with love.

I followed the voice you gave to me but now I gotta find my own

Go to *RawEm0tion
~PeterJK:iconPeterJK: Dec 1, 2007, 9:17:21 AM
ha awesome =p i'll keep an eye out for that

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Green Eyes And Silent Lies


My Story, Part One Fav Dev
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